My thoughts:
1) Azooza's design is very unattractive, and doesn't do a good job of attracting a user's attention. Sites that sell online need to capture the attention of users in 10 seconds, otherwise those potential customers leave. I suggest redesigning your site so that its NOT a rectangle box crammed with text.
2) The title header of Azooza needs some work also. Maybe leave out the prices and put something more relative to the quality of your business. Afterall, you can always put prices as a coloured subtitle underneath.
Now, my thoughts on Universal Post Office is different. That site is very very nice. But some flaws I see are that you don't really include a strong call to action. Theres not persuasion. Why should users pay to use your service when they can get email addresses for free?
Perhaps you can add a short paragraph or list above the login section that highlights your service's usage benefits like:
Universal Post Office is a fast and easy way to manage your emailing. Choose your email address from some of the top domains that we carry! Accounts include:
- Easy to navigate inbox interface
- Top level domains to choose from
- Protect your inbox from spam
- etc. etc. etc.









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