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**MELIAM** · 11-08-2007, 01:51 PM

Hi all please take a look at http://worddeeds.com it a brand new site hoping to launch on monday its been 4 months in tha making the site is a trading platform for for buying names / deeds ect based on keywords anyone can do a full write up on the names / words they which to purchase it is working at the moment but not launching any ideas good or bad would be much apprieciated.

Regards

**BuyAuthority** · 11-08-2007, 01:55 PM

Very well organized. I like the layout and color. Great job!

**MELIAM** · 11-08-2007, 01:56 PM

Thanks for that, apprieciated whats your thought on the whole concept?

**BuyAuthority** · 11-08-2007, 02:05 PM

I don't understand it but hey it's just me. I've got tons of things I do myself.

**MELIAM** · 11-08-2007, 02:13 PM

Hi BuyAuthority,
Its hope fully going to be the next big thing (hope so) it works like this for eg you run a britney spears related website then you can go to worddeeds.com and purchase britney spears then you can do a write up about here and then place a link to your site on there also you can sell the deed at alater date and also sell advertising space to others this will work for anything web design, car sales etc

**tonyfloyd** · 11-08-2007, 02:13 PM

nice layout.....is this site's theme sort of like milliondollarhomepage.com?....where u purchase ad text space?

**MELIAM** · 11-08-2007, 02:18 PM

Hi TonyFloyd,
No not realy as you know with the milliondollarpage you purchased pixels and an image for people to click on with my site you can do loads more add content, resell for profit sell advertising space ect all deed pages are seo friendley so should get indexed pretty quick

**tonyfloyd** · 11-08-2007, 02:44 PM

yeah....but similar type idea.....what exactly are deeds?...are those popular in england? what platform did u use to develop?

Tony

**MELIAM** · 11-08-2007, 02:47 PM

Yes you are right simular idea platform was left to my designer some of the deeds are popular over here in the uk but can purchase for any thing realy

cursal · 11-08-2007, 03:20 PM

That first paragraph should better explain what the site does/offer.
I spent 15 secs after reading the opening paragraph with no clue what I could do here.
then left.

Over look is clean.

**MELIAM** · 11-08-2007, 03:24 PM

Hi cursal,
Thanks for that you are right need to explain a bit more what the site is and does will work on that thanks again all comments welcome

Regards

**Patton** · 11-16-2007, 12:35 AM

Design is clean, but giving the page elements a little more "breathing room" might make the site easier on the eyes. And like cursal said, it's hard to understand what the site is about at first (and second) glance. You sell words(??) is all I really got out of it. But there is no (or very little) explanation of your product and what exactly it is your selling and why I should be interested in it.

Hope that gives you some ideas to play with.

Cheers