06-16-2009, 03:24 PM
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Originally Posted by james2002  | Hi there,
The template layout of the site is fine.
Some things to consider. imho - The top navigation links are unrelated as they link to sites other than Kitchen Mixer Tap. I think they'd be better in the sidebar, in their own box, perhaps labeled 'additional links' or 'recommended sites'.
- Logo. we need a logo.think it better if it would be in the header itself, i.e above the nav links. The 'Buy Cheap' & 'Kitchen Mixer Taps' blurbs take up a lot of web page real estate, being mostly white space. (and the comic sans font has got to go ... Typeface Inspired by Comic Books Has Become a Font of Ill Will , search for "Ban Comic Sans" Google and you'll see what I mean.
- I'll finish with one more suggestion.The lead text is ok, might be useful to flesh it out, but the Google ads on top are a bit overpowering. You have ads in the sidebar and at the foot of the page. Think people coming to the site and finding the top Google ads taking up most of the "above the fold" area of the web page, will have them quickly hitting the back button , thinking that there isn't much to see.
 You might want to start with the product list, after the lead in text, and insert the ads somewhere in the middle between the listed products.
my 2 cents
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