Reviews Welcome

**skeet** · 06-27-2006, 11:13 AM

Brought this domain name and had it parked. Been reading the forum and decided to put together a page for it. Please review and let me know what you think.

http://www.ipodssales.com

This is my first self design site. Html not that good
Please review and leave feed back.
What type pages and content should I add to it.

**myst woman** · 08-05-2006, 05:13 PM

Is it a site or a classified ad onscreen? Take it down a notch. I started "tuning out" at all the ads. I guess if you have an Ipod you'll relate differently though.

**Banned: Preoccupy** · 08-05-2006, 05:15 PM

Cool and Wonderful..... No need for any other comments...?

**whitebark** · 08-05-2006, 05:21 PM

You have to ask yourself do you want this to simply turn some ad clicks for revenue or do you want to make a serious store out of it. Right now it looks like a park page which is good for the first use, but terrible for the second.

You also have 80 errors on the page which is not good for such a small static html page. Try http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...dssales.com%2F to see what you can correct. Aim for the lowest amount of errors possible as it means it should display properly in all browsers. w3.org is great because it helps by giving the fix along with the error.

Keep plugging away!