developing a wine site

[level200]

Hi Everyone

I have attempted to develop one of my domains, its in the early stages and I was wondering about content.

www.winetastingholidays.com

Any feedback welcome but please remember that it is unfinished.

Cheers
John

[tonyfloyd]

looks nice so far....what platform are u using to develop it?....sign up for some wine affiliates....and add links in your posts......cj.com has many....

tony

[dcristo]

I think that's a great domain mate. If you include Australia in your Wine Travels, there's the Hunter Valley in NSW and Adelaide is known for it's good wines as well.

[Busynic]

site is neat and presentable.
The content paragraphs are too long for my eyes. Suggest breaking them into smaller chunks that are easier to read. Try to aim for about 5 to 6 lines if you can per paragraph.

As a suggestion, perhaps having some h2 headings that say something like 5 tips on finding good wine, or 10 of the best wine regions in the world. etc

Good luck