Dnforum Logo for Merchandise

[Adam Dicker]

Congrats to Cursal for putting together a great logo and merchandise area for Dnforum on Cafe Press.

This will be posted later today, but here is a preview.

http://www.cafepress.com/DNForumShop

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[Acro]

Not trying to undermine your selection, Adam, but the large "COM" in Arial Rounded competes with the sans-serif "DNF". They should not be of equal size and color contrast alone is not enough; the use of inverse is a good starting point but as you can see, it visually leaves a large space at the top of the "COM", while "DNF" does not breathe within the constraints of the box (too tight). I like the placement of the dot, but it should be larger for effect. The byline needs to be wider, to the edges of the logo above it, preferably in a non-rounded font. That's my creative criticism from looking at the merchandise.

[dominator]

sorry, but i have to say it:

domainers should keep doing domaining
and designers should design

otherwise you get amateur results
as we can see now

(the only exception is acro)

[Adam Dicker]

Not trying to undermine your selection, Adam, but the large "COM" in Arial Rounded competes with the sans-serif "DNF". They should not be of equal size and color contrast alone is not enough; the use of inverse is a good starting point but as you can see, it visually leaves a large space at the top of the "COM", while "DNF" does not breathe within the constraints of the box (too tight). I like the placement of the dot, but it should be larger for effect. The byline needs to be wider, to the edges of the logo above it, preferably in a non-rounded font. That's my creative criticism from looking at the merchandise.

Nothing wrong with good constructive criticism, we have plenty of time to make adjustments.

Thanks!

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