>>>I think you need to inject DNForum at least once more in the middle of the ad.
>>>On a technical note Adam...as this is a listening ad I would ask the voice to pronounce the 'U' in forum a little more as when listened to it sounds a bit like DNForm.com. It might seem a picky point but a domainer would assume it was "forum" but as this is being targeted to non domainers best to make the pronunciation very clear...
Just my 2 cents worth...
Best of luck in your promotion as it might bring a little more end-user money in...all those new members will make it interesting for the mods as well..
Jim
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