Please review www.FashionMagazine.info

[godomain]

Hi,

This is my first live website. I took about 4 days to develop and upload.

Could you please review my site and let me know how could I attract visitors to this site

Site: http://www.fashionmagazine.info

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[meetmydomains]

Hi -

I guess I will go first!

First, congrats on completing your first site! The learning curve only gets easier from here.

When I pulled up the site the first things that caught my attention were a few small code issues you can fix pretty easily. You header section is not tall enough. Open your style sheet and look for the #header section. Increase the height to 100 or so, for visitors to see the entire header section.

I also noticed your first H1 tag is listed as < h1>fashionmagazine.info< /h1>

You should change that to reflect what your target key phrase would be. In other words, what would sometype into a search engine and you expect them to find your site?

Again, farther down the page you have: < h1> Introduction </h1> This too should be a targeted phrase versus a generic term.

Aside from a few sections like that.. looks fine!

Mark

 

[HomerJ]

a few of the menu links are broken. 'fashion news' 'fashion products' 'fashion jewellry'

i would consider putting some more content on the homepage. it just looks like an adsense site. but that may be what your going for anyway. but more content is better for search engines.

there are lots of useful tips on this forum about how to build traffic.

 

[godomain]

Hi MeetMyDomains / HomerJ,

Thanks a lot for your reviews. I would definitely implement your suggestions as the first work, tomorrow morning.

 

[usedcargod]

I would also recommend turning off the public service announcements from adsense. It's the default option when you are creating the code so you have to proactively deselect it.
Good Luck with the site. It's a good name.
K

 

[cursal]

Ads and <h1> text over lap in IE7 @ 1024x768
Only the ads (G and Amazon) overlap in Firefox with wide screen 1680x1050

 

[godomain]

Hi,
Thanks for all your comments. I modified the header section.

More reviews are always appreciated.

 

[DDC_Cyn]

First off there are some layout issues when I view this in Firefox. The text Fashion Magazine welcomes you is totally chopped off on the left as if it's being covered over by the ad on the side. Then under that your Amazon box is cut off on the right.

When I click on an article, your ads actually run over the text.

The biggest issue is the lack of style. It's a fashion site so I expect to see some fashion photography. You need photos and your content needs to be more prominent.

 

[Mxhub]

Look good. what software did you use for your site?