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[Andrew Shaw]

Edited everything.

 

[GT Web]

ummm, it's, ummm...interesting.

Honestly I'm not sure I like the style, sort of overly casual and long winded.

I don't really like the message either, lol, if that's someone's business (praying to sell a name every few days) than they wont be around long.

That being said, it's a decent start, just keep refining it and try to say as much relevant info you can in as little space as possible - at least if you're trying to become a better business writer (if you're an Arts student, just fill up pages and pages saying the same thing over and over )

 

[Andrew Shaw]

Thanks GT, much appreciated.

 

[Focus]

Take a big bong hit before you post anything on DNF, trust me on that one! k:=~

 

[VirtualT]

Take a big bong hit before you post anything on DNF, trust me on that one! k:=~

I agree, whats the worst that could happen?...

 

[Andrew Shaw]

I dont understand?

If your implying that I was high when I wrote that, you are wrong. I have nothing against people that do that, most of my friends smoke every day. Not me man.

 

[GT Web]

I dont understand?

If your implying that I was high when I wrote that, you are wrong. I have nothing against people that do that, most of my friends smoke every day. Not me man.

People who smoke it everyday piss me off....get a life, seriously.

That being said, every once in a while is a lot of fun. :-/

 

[Focus]

People who smoke it everyday piss me off....get a life, seriously.

That being said, every once in a while is a lot of fun. :-/

I totally agree...like I said..only before every post on DNF! lol :lol:

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